Hello bloggers
This week we had a writer's workshop on Dialogue in Literacy.  We had to write a dialogue between two people planning a trip, and then go back and add action that showed them packing.  I tried to make each character stand out with their own personality based on what they said and did.  Let me know what you think and if there is anything you would do differently.
My one is about two boys going on a trip to Antarctica

“Well need goggles” said Jake as he was putting two pairs of gucci snow goggles in his bag.

“You can pack them” replied Josh as he was packing the jackets.  

“Can you go get the boots and skis?”

“Ok”

“Also get the gloves and hand warmers while your there”

“Ok”

“I think we will need another bag cuz this one is getting kinda full”

“Ok I'll grab that as well”

“Think that is it, we are all packed and ready to go”said Jake

Please put any feed back in the comments.

Coca Cola brotherly love IPARC for Gillstrom lit

Hi bloggers,
this term in Gillstrom literacy we are writing narratives so we needed to plan it.  As a practace we had to do whats called an IPARC. (Intro problem action resolution and conclusion)  We watched a video and then we had to go back and name what happend in the video in order. 
This is what I came out with in the end.
Here is a link to the video:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S5h2lmROw5A
Please put feedback in the comments.

Hello fellow bloggers.  Its time for the DLO for this week's vocab in Gilstrom literacy. We have to make a DLO (digital learning object) from one of out six vocab words and put it in a sentence and then post it on our blogs.
I made a video about the word Peered.

In the video it shows me peering around corners and watching my friend Isla doing some work.
My sentence for peered is "He peered around the corner and watched her do her work."

Please ask any questions or put feed back in the comments.

The Wright Brothers Biography

Hi bloggers, This term in the Toroa our inquiry is based on powerful and influential people and so we had to decide on a person to do out inquiry about, I chose the wright brothers. This is my biography about the Wright Brothers.

Please put any feed back or your opinion on it in the comments.

Maori posters.

Hello fellow bloggers.
On Friday morning the Toroa hub we made maori posters.
Here are some of the ones that I made.

I hope you liked them.  

By Jacob McGraw

Goals for 2019

This week in Toroa hub at Marshland school we made goal ladders. This is my one with my reading, writing, maths and behavior to learning goals.
 I hope you like it.

Five R's

At Marshland School our values are called the five R's respect,resourcefulness, reciprocity, reflectiveness and resilience.
 These are some samples of us showing the values.