Coca Cola brotherly love IPARC for Gillstrom lit

Hi bloggers,
this term in Gillstrom literacy we are writing narratives so we needed to plan it.  As a practace we had to do whats called an IPARC. (Intro problem action resolution and conclusion)  We watched a video and then we had to go back and name what happend in the video in order. 
This is what I came out with in the end.
Here is a link to the video:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S5h2lmROw5A
Please put feedback in the comments.

Hello fellow bloggers.  Its time for the DLO for this week's vocab in Gilstrom literacy. We have to make a DLO (digital learning object) from one of out six vocab words and put it in a sentence and then post it on our blogs.
I made a video about the word Peered.

In the video it shows me peering around corners and watching my friend Isla doing some work.
My sentence for peered is "He peered around the corner and watched her do her work."

Please ask any questions or put feed back in the comments.

The Wright Brothers Biography

Hi bloggers, This term in the Toroa our inquiry is based on powerful and influential people and so we had to decide on a person to do out inquiry about, I chose the wright brothers. This is my biography about the Wright Brothers.

Please put any feed back or your opinion on it in the comments.

Maori posters.

Hello fellow bloggers.
On Friday morning the Toroa hub we made maori posters.
Here are some of the ones that I made.

I hope you liked them.  

By Jacob McGraw